Tuesday, September 2, 2014
Review: One Night of Sin
One Night of Sin by Veronica Velvet
My rating: 2 of 5 stars
One Night of Sin is a novelette about a naughty librarian and a sexy billionaire. The premise of the story is great. While it definitely had its moments - I loved the scene in which he sucks her fingers clean - overall, the story fell a bit flat for me. The dialogue was a tad stiff and formal at times, causing it to seem stilted. And while I enjoyed the alternating points of view as I like getting to see what each character is thinking, I found their internal dialogue to be formal as well. It was almost as if I was reading a diary they wrote knowing that someone would be reading it. It just wasn't my cup of tea.
For me, this was just an okay read. That said, I would absolutely download a sample of the next book in the series to see if I enjoyed the writer's style of writing more in a longer format. Ms. Velvet certainly peaked my interest enough with the sheriff's response to our naughty librarian that I would definitely give it a try. As always, I recommend downloading a sample of the story for yourself and giving it a try if it's the kind of story that appeals to you - just because it didn't make my favorites list doesn't mean it wrong make yours.
I received a complimentary copy of the book in exchange for an honest review.
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